A nice tune, but would it REALLY fit into a rave?
Being brutally honest here. This sounds like the sorta music you'd here in a Modern old time fairground (stolen idea :D) , not a rave.
First things first! You got the synths right. Maybe a little too Trance-ish for my liking, but nevertheless, The synth sounds amazing. I wonder how many different ones you used, I can honestly only hear one. I'd say, critically, to use a bit more variety when it comes to it.
Now, onto my major gripe. Its the kick. I'm assuming your bass kick is on every other beat, otherwise this song would be waaay too slow for any rave.
If you made that kick have a snare and a high hat, with have some sort of breakbeat-ish or DnB charm, I reckon this would go down a treat in a rave. At the moment it just sounds too slow.
Hope to hear more stuff from you soon!
-Darks-